就“读写任务”给考生的七点建议
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作者: 符曼静
笔者就读写任务中“发表自己看法”这一部分给考生提出一些建议，并结合近几年的高考真题进行分析，希望能对考生有益。
一、按要点分段
每个要点分段单独写，使文章层次清晰，让阅卷老师一目了然。近五年的读写任务都设置了3个具体的内容要点，因此读写任务的文章除概要外，有三段。
[实例1]（2011年广东）
以约120个词讲述一次你（或你的朋友）想家的经历，内容包括：
（１）时间、地点和起因；
（２）想家给学习和生活带来的影响；
（３）你（或你朋友）是如何应对的。
参考范文：
In fact, in real life, everyone would have an experience of feeling homesick. I remember when I was 10 years old, I was sent to my uncle’s in another city because my parents were busy. There, I studied for two years. Although my uncle and his family were kind to me, I still felt homesick.
There is no denying/doubt that feeling homesick will cause endless awful effects on the aspects of my study and life. To start with, owing to the different teaching methods of different teachers, I found it difficult for me to understand the lesson. What’s worse, I often got sick because I didn’t adapt to the climate there.
In view of the seriousness of this problem, my priorities now should be focused on eliminating it in the following ways. First and foremost, I must do my utmost to accept that place. What’s more, it would be better if I do more exercises and pay special attention to my health. In addition, I’d better communicate with my teachers as much as possible and turn to teachers for help when coming across difficult problems.
二、段首要有主题句
每段的主题句一定要位于每段的段首，且单独一句话。然后才是支持主题句的论据，使文段的结构更清晰。
[实例2]（2008广东要点1）
中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。
It goes without saying that college life will be quite different from that of middle school. In college we will pay great attention to our overall development while in middle school we put much emphasis on the results of exams. In order to adjust myself to the coming college life, I decide to gain more knowledge about the society and life skills. Besides, I will try my best to become an independent and mature college student.
三、列举两三条支撑点
每个要点中凡是要求列举的内容（如原因、影响、措施等内容），一般要列举两三条。
[实例3]（2009广东要点3）
你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。
I strongly recommend that tourists should be forbidden to get too close to zoo animals. First of all, ways should be found to increase people’s awareness of animal protection. Then, the authority concerned should make specific regulations to protect zoo animals. What’s more, those who break the rule are to blame for it and in the worst case, should be fined. I believe only by taking these measures can we live in harmony with animals.
四、以经历说明感受
每个要点的主题要明确，需与中文的要点一一对应。如若要点中要求以经历说明感受，那么就不能不描述经历，而只单一地谈感受。
[实例4]（2007广东要点2）
以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受。
When I was a primary school student, you always encouraged me to do well in school and each evening I was asked to present at least one new thing I had learned that day. You told me that I could be whatever I wanted to be, as long as I got good grades and continue my education. When I met some difficulties, you inspired me to bravely face and solve them by my own brightness and effort.
五、直陈方法措施
若要点中要求考生阐述解决某个问题的方法或措施时，建议不用if从句或祈使句，直接用陈述句阐述，使文章内容更清晰明了。
注意：不选用第二人称阐述建议。若是阐述自己解决问题的方法时，选用第一人称；若阐述他人给出的建议时，则选用第三人称。
[实例5]（2010广东要点2）
你的父母（或其他亲人）是如何鼓励你学习的。
My parents always encourage me to study in the following ways. First and foremost, they insist on praising me every time I make a little progress to give me confidence. What’s more, they keep giving me vivid description of my bright future to urge me to go on. Besides, they often help me to solve the problems I am faced with in study so as to let meknow their support.
六、正确使用人称。
如要点中要求谈谈假如你处在某种处境下，你会有什么反应时，该段中的“你”就要改成“我”，即假如我处在某种情况下，我会如何如何。
[实例6]（2009广东要点2）
假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应。
If I were in the situation of those animals, I would also get irritated by the continuous disturbance. Besides, I would try to avoid them every time I met them so that I would not be disturbed and would have the private room to enjoy myself.
七、连贯要到位。
恰当使用一些过渡性的词语（如：besides, to stat with; what’s more, moreover等），以增强文章的连贯性和可读性。
[实例7](2009广东要点1）
人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照。
The reason why people like taking photos with animals in the zoo can be listed as follows. To start with, in their daily life, it is not easy to see the zoo animals, so people take photos with the animals just out of curiosity. What’s more, not many people have the common sense of animals’ living habits, which results in their improper behaviours.
[即时练习]
1. 试题精选。（2011年深圳市宝安区高三摸底考试）
[写作内容]
以120词就“节日礼物”发表你的看法，内容包括：
（１） 你对过节送礼如何理解？
（2） 你印象最深刻的一次过节送礼的经历；
（3） 你从此次经历中获得的启示或者感悟。
[参考范文]
In my opinion, sending each other gifts on holidays is a good way to express love or care. There is no denying that it is quite meaningful to do so，especially to our family and friends.
One of my most impressive experiences of sending others gifts on holidays is when I sent my mum a gift on the Mother’s Day at the age of 6. On that day, many kids prepared little gifts for their mothers and so did I. I went out to the flower shop and bought a rose home with the pocket money I had saved. Receiving the gift, my mum was so moved that she gave me a kiss full of love in return.
This experience tells me that I should cherish the chance that the holidays offer me to express my love and care to my beloved ones. Besides, from this experience I get to know that it doesn’t really matter what gifts I give to my beloved ones, but it does matter that I do remember and love them.
2. 原创练习。
以120词发表你的看法，并包括如下要点：
（１） 你如何看待虎妈教育孩子的方式；
（2）中国留美学生人数增加的原因；
（3） 你认为怎样才能更好地教育孩子。
[参考范文]
From my point of view, Tiger Mom’s way of educating her children should not be encouraged. She focuses too much on her children’s IQ development but little on their mental health. And it’s not good of her to ignore her children’s rights to have a happy and playful childhood.
The reason why the number of Chinese students studying in the USA is on the increase is due to well-developed Chinese economy. In addition, most of the Chinese parents are willing to spend money on their children to ensure that they get the best education possible.
In my opinion, we can educate our children in the following ways. First, we should pay more attention to children’s mental health. Besides, a relaxing environment together with quality educationshould be encouraged, which will help cultivate smart, creative, as well as physically-and-mentally healthy children in our country.
（作者单位：深圳市新安中学）
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